▶ Your Answer :
The given line graph illustrates the amount of traded products in England for 28 years from 1974 by four types of transportation, which are cars, ships, trains, and subways.
Except rail transport, other used transport types had showed an the upward trend. Especially, the amount of products traded by road grew to about 100 million tones from 70 million tones, though it had a fluctuation between 1982 and to 1994.
Besides, there are ships and trains went up and down ?? at a moment. From the figure, those (those는 무엇을 의미합니까?) seem similar and different at the same time. Although both ships and trains started with the similar number 40 million tones, they faced different ending, 65 and 40 respectively. Under those, pipeline transport maintained the same ranking during the survey period. Pipeline The amount of goods transported goods by pipeline had risen gradually, but its peak, at the end, could not take over any other transportation ?.
Overall, the popularity of all four transportation types used for trade went up through the period no matter how it fluctuated and changed dramatically and slightly.
SCORE: 4.5-5
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