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Modern people are man is living in a
flood of advertisement. All the media that we are exposed everyday life are filled
with advertisement,. Even on the movies and television tv series, people man can easily find the
indirect advertisement. I believe this overflowing advertisement plays a rather
negative effect on people.
Firstly, people have to face the advertisement
not only from all the imaginable media, but also from random walls or signs on
the street. In this case, it is possible to say that people hardly have the
right to select what kind of advertisement they want to see. Then, the idea of people can be driven in a very narrow-minded way. For example, if a child sees a tv commercial about plastic surgery continuously, the child can unconsciously consider it in a good way without filtering. Then he or she can be
easily leaded to a wrong or too extreme standard towards beauty, and further, the self-consciousness about his or her own looks.
Secondly, the advertisement can limit the
customer’s right to choose. It is natural to feel familiar and reliable from a
brand name we see every day. So if there is a big company running a big amount
of advertisement, people would be brainwashed easily and they would be ended up
losing the chance of choosing the product for from its function and usefulness. For
example, extending the discussion to the bigger circle of the market, if there is a company using the money on donation and supporting
social activities rather than putting more commercials.<전 문장이 stand alone 할 수 없습니다. 뒷 문당과 연결을 해주셔야합니다> This company would
eventually be ignored from the customers because of a lack of commercial
exposure.
As I explained above, there could be many a lot of
negative aspects in advertisement. (문장을 and, but, or로 시작하는 것을 추천하지 않습니다)>But we still need to remind ourselves that if there are proper regulations
controlling the downside of advertisement, it can be a good factor stimulating
the consuming and in the end the market itself.
Score: 4.5 Comment: 질문이 discuss both views이기 때문에 positive/negative 관점을 둘다 서술해주셔야합니다. 패널티가 적용이 될수 있으며 큰 감점 요인이 될 수 있습니다. Negative points에 대한 내용은 좋다고 생각합니다. 수고 하셨습니다. |