Writing Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the advantages?
You should write at least 250
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The issue of, in modern society the social media is replacing face-to-face interaction can be a hugely controversial topic and it can cause heated debate amongst people who hold strong views on this issue. I opine that the people get various benefits when they using the social media.
Some people argue that, excessive use of social media occur two negative phenomena. First of all, social media obstruct the true relationship between people and people. To be specific, people do not like to leak their personal information because the other person can be a murder or a swindler and when judging these things social media is more dangerous than talking face to face. Moreover, the possibility of personal information leakage is very high. Criminals can easily get important information from other people such as the home address and cell phone number or the bank account thus, from this point of view frequent use of social media can occur dangerous consequences.
However, some people hold the view that social media have two positive aspects when people using that. First and foremost, people can save time and money when they use social media. For example, when people have a conversation with others they need to move long distances and these processes people spend money and time however in social media people do not have to through this tedious process. Also, people can easily know what others like and dislike. This means it is easier to find other people who have similar personalities with them eventually they can have a more satisfying conversation.
As it has been demonstrated, although people can not avoid from few risks. However, there are more positive benefits when they using social media.
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공부하다가 멘탈 터져서 한 1주일정도 라이팅을 안쓰다가 오늘 다시 작성했는데... 좀 못쓴것 같습니다 ㅠㅠ.