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It is widely accepted that the proper age line of second education is controversial subject. Some people claim that children will start to learn exotic language as soon as possible, while others deny these opinions. I will discuss several benefits on this essay in details. First of all, children should learn exotic language as early as possible. In other words, children can absorb more easily than adult because their immature brain are more flexible to take new knowledge, movement and even bad habits. One of the best example is ‘mother language’ The only difference between mother language and second language is the time when the start point begin. Literally we absorbed our own language from our parent since when we were kid. Thus our flexible brain just naturally accepted all kinds of language structure such as grammar, vocabulary. Secondary learning totally different area makes children get more opportunity to take new things and used to dealing with even strange tasks. For example, since after 2000, plenty of primary school in Korea make diverse language exchange programs with their own sibling school. Although the programs are only for vacation because of children’s academic schedule, those programs regard as sensational education method since now days. In conclusion, I definitely there are much more benefits to learn foreign language since children were young because the natural ability to absorb language and the largest opportunity to understand exotic world.
*라이팅 팁 적어주신거 읽어보고 장단점 둘다 쓰는대신 (outweigh 같은경우는 채점관마다 다르다고 하셨지만..!) 장점만 서술했는데 전개 방법 맞을까요?
*또 예시가 길게 작성됬네요 ㅠㅠ 내용자체가 좀 부실해보이기도 하구요 (특히 두번째 문단에서 그렇게 되었네요 시간맞추고 쓰다보니 정신없이 썼나봅니다 ㅠㅠ 다음부터는 시정하겠습니다~~!)
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