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The tables illustrate sales of
Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in five European countries which are the
UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden in 1990 and 2004.
Overall, it is apparent that the country most consumed (consume 과 sale 은 전혀 다릅니다. 패러프레이징하는 건 좋은데, 그 과정에서 의미가 달라지지 않도록 주의해주세요.) Fairtrade-labelled
coffee is the UK and Switzerland shows the highest sales of most consumed Fairtrade-labelled bananas is Switzerland over
the given period.
For the first table, the most notable feature
is that the UK’s sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee were only 1.5 million euros
in 1999, however it was dramatically increased to 20 million euros in 2004. While
Switzerland had the highest sales in 1999, and it was rose merely by 3 million
euros in 2004. The sales amount of Other other countries, Denmark, Belgium and
Sweden, were shown that less than 2 million euros each in both 1999 and 2004. (비록 작은 증가는 있었지만~이라는 표현 정도는 넣어주세요.)
For the second table, Switzerland had (두 번째 문단과 비슷한 맥락에서, had, 즉 소유 역시 sales 와는 거리가 있습니다.) a lot
of Fairtrade-labelled bananas among five countries, with 15 in 1999 and 47 million
euros in 2004. On the other hand, other countries showed less consumption of Fairtrade-labelled
bananas compare to Switzerland. (마지막 문단은 중요 사항들이 누락되어서 다시 작성해주셔야 하는데, 이에 대해서는 총평에서 말씀드리겠습니다.) |