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The provided chart gives information on the number of trips made by children to travel to and from school in one country in the years 1990 and 2010.
There were lots of changes in the number of the means of transportation which consist of car, walking, cycling, walking and bus, and bus. (여기 관련해서는 절대 이렇게 쓰면 안 되는데, 이에 대해서는 밑에 링크를 하나 첨부해드리겠습니다.)
The most significant change was happened between car and walking. In 1990, above 12 millions of children (표와 항목을 꼼꼼하게 확인해주셔야 합니다. 표의 숫자는 어린이의 수가 아닌, trip 의 수를 보이고 있습니다. 둘은 동일시할 수 없는데, 이는 한 명의 어린이가 1년동안 1번 움직이는 게 아니라 여러번 움직이기 때문이죠. 즉 above 12 million trips were made on foot ~ 등과 같이 작성할 수 있어야 합니다. 다른데에도 다 바꿔주시면 돼요.) traveled to and from school on foot, and just over 4 millions traveled by car. However in 2010, the number of car passenger dramatically increased to about 11 millions, and the number of children who traveled on foot decreased to only 6 millions, consequently there was change in the first ranking of the means highest method of transportation.
During the same period given, the figures for other transport all decreased. The number of children who took the bicycle to and from school, which was the biggest change in 3 means(cycling, walking and bus, bus), decreased by about 70 percent (6.0 정도에서는 크게 중요하지는 않긴 한데, 어차피 퍼센트를 구할 거면 66.7% 등으로 조금 더 구체적인 수치를 구하면 어떨까 싶네요.), that was about 6 millions in 1990 and 2 millions in 2010.
목표점수 : 6.0 소요시간 : 20분
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