Your Answer ▼ Recently, individuals tend to pursue a wide range of data about what they want. Some say that sharing a lot of information is beneficial in the development of science, business and study. Others claim that there is information which can not share due to having higher value. I will compare these views for the following reasons.
To begin with, it is helpful for learner to share various information because they can obtain many chances of education. In Korea, as Youtube grows in popularity, many individuals update videos about how to study and how to obtain high scores in a variety of test. Those who subscribe Youtube can choose contents which they have interest about at no cost, and this grows up their interests and passion of learning. Moreover, sharing of much information can enable to develop science and business. Precisely, if prominent companies release their technology openly, others business will reduce opportunity cost and failure by using this skills.
Meanwhile, information about technology represents efforts of workers. Although their valuable data available to everyone, they do not great income and may feel unequal. The public may accustom to recevie other's technology because of convenience and low risks. This will be obstacle to enhance growth of societies. In addition, exposure of private data is increasing as it is required on the Internet. Private data has enormous value because it can be used by voice phishing. Voice pishing also threatens financial problems to individuals.
To conclude, as the public interact with various data each other, they can obtain benefits such as academic fields and development of economy. However, I can assume that exchanging information can cause serious problems due to exposure of private data and reduction of development. 갈수록 못 쓰는 것 같아요... 문법 신경쓸수록 더 이상해져요
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