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Nowadays, people are arguing argue the importance of foreign language to get adapt to global era >> 현재 글에선 이게 문제 제기로 나올 주제가 아닙니다. In fact, in Korea, >> Korea로 장소를 한정시키면 안됩니다 almost of most schools have been teaching various foreign languages except primary school. However, >> 문두부사 뒤 콤마입니다 some people are of opinion that student have to learn foreign language from when the study in primary school. Obviously, this argument has many positive sides for young students. >> 그래서 동의한다 안 한다라는 말이 있어야 합니다
Firstly, if they>> ?? learn foreign language from young age, it will be beneficial to absorb quickly the a language quickly >> if 절은 보통 주어를 설명할 때 부분에 해당됩니다 주장은 if 로 나올 수가 없습니다. Young students have better linguistic abilities, which absorbs language very well, than older students >> 이 부분이 주장으로 첫 문장으로 나올 수 있겠습니다. For example, people usually finish learning their mother tongue until when they enter to primary school. However, as for older people, even though they afford to learn a foreign language, they usually cannot help undergoing the hardships of learning language.
Secondly, young students might can adapt easily to this global era easily as they learn foreign language. Now, >> 문두 부사 뒤 콤마입니다 some languages have become a essential means.>>말하고자하는 essential means가 뭐죠? So, >> 문두에 so also and or but은 쓰지 않습니다 they enable>> enable who? to approach other countries` cultures or characters account for they can speak foreign languages>>??. Furthermore, young students can expand their sight of other countries by studying foreign language. >> 주장이 또 나올 순 없습니다
To conclude, fortunately, the argument, which is about teaching foreign languages in primary school, >> 문장 사이에 which 수식절이 나온다면 콤마로 앞뒤를 잘라주세요 has risen more serious than the >> 미래 현재 과거 모두 the를 앞에 붙입니다 past. So, some primary schools have prepared to start teaching English. As I mentioned above, in order to help students to adapt to global era, primary schools have to teach foreign language to their students. It will be helpful and beneficial for their students. >> 결론은 서론을 페러프레이즈해서 작성해주시는게 좋습니다
단락 첫 시작 들여쓰기도 문법의 일종입니다 모두 감점입니다
논리상 문제가 있습니다 primary secondary 모두 어린 아이들인데 young students라고 하면 누군지 모릅니다 다른 부분들도 필요없는 부분들이 많고 글자수도 4단어가 부족합니다 하나라도 부족해서 글자수 미달입니다
Task Achievement - 4 Coherence and Cohesion - 5 Lexical Resource - 5 Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 5
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