<Topic> The plans
below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and
reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. |
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The two supplied
maps depict a comparison between All in all, the
dramatic changes can be observed in the overall layout of the park, which are
newly introduced café, children’s play area and so on. Some other infrastructures
are either replaced or expanded as well. (첫 번째 문장은 너무 세부적인 사항을 다루고 있으며, 두 번째 문장은 있으나 마나입니다. 참고로 지도 문제에서의 Overview는 그러한 세부적인 변화가 어떠한 큰 그림으로 이어졌는지를 다뤄주시면 돼요. 꽁치님 정도 실력이면 모범답안을 보시면 금방 감을 잡으실 겁니다.) When the park
first opened in 1920, there were two entrances. One was on the north side,
the Arnorld avenue (얘도 대문자 시작입니다.) and the other one was stood at Eldon street (얘도 대문자 시작이고요.) on the south. A
fountain was located at the center, and a stage for musicians sat on the west between
two rose gardens which occupied on the north and south each with seat areas
as its wings. On the right-hand side of the entrance of Eldon st (임의로 줄여서는 안 되고, 쭉 풀어써주셔야 합니다.), a glasshouse
stood at the southeastern corner with seats, the third rose garden and a pond
occupied on the far side. After the refurbishment of the park
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