The bar chart describes how many British Emigrations were made to choose different five different countries for living from 2004 to 2007.
Overall, it is clear that most of the the most number of (여기는 총평에서 말씀드리겠습니다.) British people selected Australia for emigration, followed by Spain during those 3 4 years. Also, one can see that the other countries which were included New Zealand, the USA and France had been not selected compared to those two countries.
To be more specific, Australia had the largest number of England immigrants in that period. Among them, it reached over 50,000 (숫자 표현에 쉼표를 넣는 것도 엄연한 문법이므로 주의해주세요! 다른데에도 다 수정해주세요~) slightly in 2006. Furthermore, even if that number of people was fell down highly in 2007, it was still higher than that in the other four countries because there were the other four countries that did not reached those figures did not reach 30000. Lastly, the The next most popular country for England people to over to was Spain, though its popularity declined over the time frame to finish at below 30000 in 2007. Approximately 20000people emigrated to New Zealand each year, while immigrants to the USA fluctuated between 20000 to 25000 people over the period.
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