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The governments have certain responsibilities to fairly (evenly가 조금 더 낫지 않을까 싶네요.) develop many different departments. In this regard, it is often argued that they should invest more in commercial organisations than in scientific research. However, some opponents and I think that they should focus more on the scientific research. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons.
Actually, science is probably the most neglected and overlooked area amongst those that the government is interested in because investing in it does not feel urgent at all. However, science includes many important subcategories that have significant influences on people’s life. For example, medical science can ultimately improve their health and when they have a better health, they can imagine the better future of themselves. If there is an early government investment, more people will be able to benefit from it earlier.
Moreover, having a strong scientific infrastructure in a country can strengthen the power of the country in a the global world. Especially in the industries related to science and research, the most important assets are people who work for and dedicate themselves to their work. However, in many countries, many scientists are working (work 가 너무 자주 쓰이고 있으므로 적절히 대체해주셔야 합니다.) in a wrong environment, and there is not much reward for them considering their amount of working hours. Investing in their work will be the way to save them as well.
In conclusion, the government should give more support for science and people who work for it. This is because it is the best possible way to remember them and their work and to show them that they are being remembered. |