▶ Your Answer : The chart illustrates on secondary education of women at the age of over 18 from different countries, Norway, the UK, Italy,>> 세개 이상의 항목 나열에선 마지막 것 and 앞에 콤마를 넣어줍니다 and Spain,>> 콤마 삭제바랍니다 from 1996 to 2003. The highest percentage on it was females from Norway, which started about 81% and kept the similar ratio to 2001. After that, it but increased to 90% in 2003. The rest of the countries were under 80% between 1996 to 2003. English women, who were edeucated after the age of 18,>> 이미 문제에서 제시되어 알 수 있는 내용으로 삭제 가능하므로 앞뒤에 콤마를 넣어줍니다 recorded approximately 70% in 1996, which was 10% lower than that of Norway in the same year. However, it was fluctuated steadily continuously in 1999, 2000, >> 서론과 마찬가지입니다 and 2002. There was an increase by 10% increase in 2003, >> 콤마 넣어주세요 comparing to that of 1996. Italian and Spanish graphs showed overlapped lines several times. 60% of Italian women in 1996 studied for secondary learning,>> 콤마 빼주세요 and it slowly went up slowly >> 동사를 꾸미는 부사는 동사 뒤에 위치하게 해주세요 to 70% in 2003. Its figure was 10% lower than that of the United Kingdom, and 20% lower than that of Norway in 2003. 55% of women from Spain participated in secondary education. It grew to 70% in 2001, but decreased by 5% to 65% in 2003. Overall, every country went up in 2003 when , comapred to thoes of in 1996. The noticeable thing was there was the same percentage among three countries, England, Italy, and Spain,>> 콤마 빼주세요 in 2001.(70%)
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