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these These diagrams illustrate the change of Grange park by
comparing the map in 1920 and today.
In general, a number of (number of 무엇이 replaced 되었는지를 적어주셔야겠죠.) was replaced with modern
facilities which was not necessary in the past such as café or parking area.
Moreover, to improve the convenience for visitors, seats located in each corner
of the park were was moved to the middle of the park. However, entrances at the
bottom and top are still located in the same place. (In general, 즉 overview 에 해당하는 사항을 너무 포괄적으로 잡아서는 안 됩니다.)
For the west side of the park, the rose garden in south
area was (지금처럼 현재의 표가 주어져있는 경우는, 과거시제도 아예 안 되는 것은 아니지만 웬만하면 현재완료를 써주시는 게 좋습니다.) moved to the central area of the park. In addition, the stage for
musicians was replaced with an amphitheatre Amphitheatre for concerts so more people might be
accommodated compare to the past.
In aspect for right (위에는 서쪽, 여기는 오른쪽으로 서술해주셨는데, 둘 중 하나로 통일해주셔야 합니다. 참고로 이 지도는 따로 동서남북 표시가 없기 때문에 가급적이면 좌우 쪽으로 적어주시는 게 좋긴 해요.) side, rose garden and pond for
water plants located in north corner was demolished. Instead of that, a café and
place for children are is established in same place of gardens and pond
respectively. Moreover, the area designed for greenhouse was replaced with a water feature which is more expanded compared to the past one (기존에는 water feature 가 없지 않나요?). Lastly, visitors
can park their cars on underground parking area located in south corner in
Eldon Street.
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