Your Answer ▼ Sedack These days, some products have been gradually are over packaged compared to the past (특정 제품이 과거부터 지금까지 계속 포장만 되어왔다는 의미 쪽이 되어버려서 수정해드렸습니다.). While some people say that buying products or not is up to customers' mind so it is their responsibility, others think supermarkets and manufacturers need to reduce the amount of packaging. In this essay both opinions and my personal thought will be discussed.
Some people think that increasing the amount of packaging of products is inevitable to manufacturers and supermarkets because of the increased prices of ingredients which are used for making products. Over packaging is just the strategy of marketing, thus it is absolutely usual response of manufacturers to the economical changes and not a way to make customers annoyed for making customers annoying. Therefore, people need to understand that this issue is coming from the general economical statement, and have their own rational choice of whether they buy the products or not.
However, others say that over packaging is obviously deception of customers. Although it is just the strategy of marketing, people will feel unsatisfaction when they buy over packaged products at first. In addition, after people know manufacturers' strategy, there is no meaning of marketing, because customers would avoid to buy that goods. That is, over packaging is not an efficient way of sale, and is rather the waste of resources. If enterprises invest more money in unnecessary packaging, the cost that customers should pay for buying will be unnecessarily increased. Therefore, in all aspects, manufacturers should reduce the amount of packaging for the products. (사실 이 문장이 없었으면 문단이 되게 위험했는데, 마지막에 잘 마무리해주셨네요.)
In conclusion, I personally think markets and manufactures have a responsibility to lessen the amount of packaging for their products because over packaging is a deception to customers and a waste of resources (이렇게 완전하게 적어주셔야 합니다.) for the reasons of deception of customers, and the waste of resources. |