Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be take into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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Some people argue that punishment should be fixed according to each crime, but others believe that circumstances and motives should be considered to conclude its punishment. I believe the latter is more reasonable.
On one hand, fixing a certain punishment for each crime can be effective and clear. If everyone can assume the result of their criminal action, and already know there is no exception, they are (개인적으로는 are 보다 would be 가 낫다고 봅니다. 물론 are 도 틀린 건 아니기에 따로 고치지는 않았지만요.) more cautious about their behaviors. Consequently, this clear law system can prevent crimes in the society, and nobody argues about the amount of punishments any more. Unfortunately, in In reality, many people blame the current legal systems because they tend to be more generous for the rich, but very harsh for the poor. However, with fixed punishments, everyone can be treated equally.
On the other hand, the reality is not that simple, for example, one crime cannot match a single one punishment mechanically. There could be an accident, but it leads to kill a person such as car accident. In contrast, there could be an intentional murder crime. Even though the both cases cause a death of a person, the accident could be inevitable and not intended, therefore the same punishment with the intentional murder is not fare at all. This is the reason why there are is many lawyers and judges in the world because they consider as many factors as they can about the cases, and try to reach the truth behind them and find out more appropriate punishments.
In conclusion, even though fixed punishment for each crime can be clear and effective, every crime should be considered by the situations and motives before fixing punishments because accidents and crimes are absolutely different.
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