The below both tables describe the sales figures of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas
among five different European countries in the years, 1999 and 2004.
Overall, the sales volumes of Fairtrade-labelled coffee among five
different countries in Europe increased substantially in the latter year whilst
there were only three countries,; Switzerland, the UK and Belgium where bananas
sales increased.
In the first year, the coffee sales in the UK
were about 1.5 (이 경우에는 단위 생략이 안 됩니다.) but it rose dramatically to 20 million euros in 2004, which and that
figure was the most significant increase compared to others. Furthermore,
Switzerland’s sales exactly doubled in 2004. Interestingly, there
were slight increases of 0.2 million euros (단위는 일부만 넣고 일부를 빼서는 안 됩니다. 타협 불가이니까 싹 넣어주세요~다른에데도 다 마찬가지입니다.) in Denmark and Sweden respectively over
the given period. Belgium was in the third position in terms of the sales
increase of Fairtrade- labeled
coffee.
There were remarkable trend changes in the
second table with going up and downs on the Banana (소문자 시작입니다.). In particular, Belgium’s
figure showed was the most rapid surge and growth with about a 7-fold increase and
ending up with 4 million in five years. Subsequently, the sales data between
the UK and Switzerland depicted were about more than five times and three times increase
each at the end of the year. In contrast, the sales volume of Sweden was (여기는 한번 직접 바꿔보세요~) a
slight decrease of 0.8 million and Denmark’s one was (여기도 바꾸시면 됩니다.) down from
2.0 in 1999 to 0.9 million in 2004.
총평: (6/7/6/6) 6.5
단위는 귀찮더라도 절대 부분 혹은 전체 생략하지 마시고 싹 넣어주시고, 이번 글도 사실 삼쏭님 실력 고려했을 때는 다소 아쉬운 편이었습니다. was 의 대부분은 싹 바꿔주시고, 또한 지금은 동일 국가 내 연도 간 증가에 관해서만 다뤄주셨는데, 이를 베이스로 삼되, 동일 연도 내 국가 간 항목의 높고 낮음 관련해서도 일부분은 넣어주세요~수고하셨습니다 :)
지문 파악은 어렵지 않았는데 기술하기에는 어려운 지문이였습니다.
많은 조언 부탁 드립니당 라이팅 목표 점수는 7.5 입니다.