▶ Your Answer : However, good physical health is an integral part of student life these days and contributes shaping a well rounded successful student. Moreover, universities can establish a reputation through its sports activities. Therefore, I agree that a university should give the same amount of money for their students' sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Increasingly, studying abroad has become a popular alternative for many students that attend college >> study abroad와 비슷한 말이므로 삭제했습니다. Independence and learning a new language are two of the reasons why some students choose to study outside their native county. 글의 질문은 에세이 형식입니다 에세이는 40분 내에 250자 내외의 글을 쓰는 것입니다 현재 글은 Task1 에 비교해서도 턱없이 모자랍니다 글자수에 유념해주시고 우선 실수에선 표시한 한 부분만 있습니다 다음 에세이부터 현재와 앞서 지적한 부분들 수정해주시면 감사드리겠습니다 이 글의 흐름으로 이어질 듯 싶다면 Task Achievement - 6 Coherence and Cohesion - 6 Lexical Resource - 6 Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 6 6.0 이상의 점수를 받을 듯 싶고 이 글로만 본다면 3, 5, 5, 5 으로 4.5점 예상합니다 |