▶ Your Answer : The chart illustrates the quantity of drinks(beer and fruit juice) >> 세세하게 써주는 편이 좋아요 per person per year in countries in the world.
Irish people enjoy beer the most, at 155 litres in average. The second and the third countries of on the rank are Germany and Austria, at 119 litres and 106 litres respectively. The rest of the nations are under 100 litres, which has a similar figure. Belgium and Denmark recoreded the same litres, at 98 ltres. Finnish people ranks tenth, at 79 litres in this table.
In terms of fruit juice, people in Canada spend the most amount of juice, at 52.6 litres. Its number is twice as much as one of the researched countries, New Zealand ranked 10th, at 24.8 litres. The second one is the United States of America, at 42.8 litres. The third nation, Germany, drink 38.6 litres, which means that German people enjoy drinking both beer and fruit juice all. The rest of countries are all in Europe. The >> 네덜란드 역시 앞에 the가 붙는 국가입니다 Netherlands rankes ninth in beer and fruit juice at the same time.
To sum up, most of Europian countries consume beverages in beer and fruit juice a lot.
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