▶ Your Answer : The graph shows average medical bill of people between 60 and 65 years old in two cities of people between 60 and 65 years old in during a particular year. In city A, the medical bill average dramatically dropped from January to June, at $145 to $88. But the falling leveled off on August. After this, the bill increased steeply until November, at $140, followed by another drop to dropping again about $130 on December. In city B, the medical bill average rose just slightly from January and reached the highest point, $118, on Feburary. The figure significantly decreased the next three 3 months. It grew a little bit on May and the increasing continued until August and peaked at near $100. Afterwards And then, the bill reduced, reaching its reached the lowest point at $82 in October. At the end of the year, the bill went up again to more than $100. In conclusion, the medical bill average of people fluctuated continuously and compare to city B, city A's bill is higher except for the months from June to September.
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