▶ Your Answer :
The given two charts indicate how much local
government spent on nine sectors in 2000 and 2010.
As clearly seen from the charts, the expenses
on education, healthcare and pension were by far the greatest amount of all
sectors, and the sum of them were more than half of all at 64 percent in 2000
and 61 percent in 2010. Moreover, the figures of the three parts showed almost
similar level in 2000 and 2010 with the figures remaining stable at 24% in 2000
and 21% in 2010, at 21% in 2000 and 20% in 2010, 19% in 2000 and 2010
respectively.
Looking at the changed parts<(change가 있었다면 위 문단의 expense도 바뀌긴 바뀐것입니다), the most
striking thing is the proportion of interest on borrowing, and it doubled to by 10
percent in 2010 compared to that in 2000. Furthermore, the expenditures on
transport, cultures and others took up the least percentage in both 2000 and
2010, but the figure of transport in 2000 had was three times more than that in
2010, and the percentage of culture and leisure halved from 2% in 2000 to 1% in
2010. <(what about welfare and defense?)
In summary, the expense which the local
government spent on nine parts in 2000 and 2010 elucidates that there is little
change over the research period.
Score: 7.5 Comment: 잘 서술 해주셨습니다. welfare and defense에 대해서도 정보를 전달해주시면 좋을 것 같습니다. 수고 하셨습니다.
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