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At a glance, it
seems that enormous amount of money which has been spending on space
development is just a wasting on uncertain possibility. In this regard, many
people attest that the money should be spent on taking care of current
problems. Nonetheless, I am of the opinion that the investment should be
maintained for sustainable flourish of human being. I shall articulate in
detain in the following essay.
Truly, contemporary society confronts a
number of problems to be coped with. And it is certain that allocating abundant
budget will makes the problem easier to be addressed. Still many people have been suffering from poverty, lack of
education and crimes. Besides, it seems that there are no obvious and
remarkable outcomes of space research which intimate with life of ordinary
people. Thus, many people support the opinion that the government should stop
spend money on fantasy.
On the other hand, two advantages can be
considered for studying and exploring outside of the earth. First of all, considering
that the resource of the earth is limited and we have to pursue the sustainable
flourish of human beings to the far future, travelling planets is one of essential
approaches to seek additional source of energy and alternative shelter for
human beings in the long run. It should be aware that we still do not have decisive
method to stop or overcome running out of fossil fuel and to secure alternative
residential area for future generation. Secondly, aerospace is already a huge
field of industry itself. Many universities, research initiatives, companies
and governments are hiring experts, researchers, professors and students to
improve related technologies and to make practical achievements. This trend
creates various beneficial economic effects not only for the scheme of universe
but also many related industries such as robot, battery, textile and food.
To recapitulate, although there are many
immediate problems have to be addressed, we should do not discard making an
effort in space exploration since it creates a lot of beneficial effects in
economy and science field nowadays and one of the promising ways to thrive our descendants,
simultaneously.
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