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Of late, one of the most significant discussions in modern society is the method of communication method. Regarding this issue, if on one hand, it can be said that there are a range of benefits when people make use of social media for communication, it can also be said that the drawback of this issue should not be ignored. The purpose of this essay is to examine both viewpoints with an understandable conclusion.
There are those with a belief that the use of social media is positive in many aspects. The primary ground that is clear to see behind their argument is that more and more people are finding it increasingly possible for them to be easy to communicate with total strangers, provided that there are simple communication methods. (엔터키는 딱 문단이 구분될 때에만 두 번 쳐주세요! 뒷 문단도 마찬가지입니다.)Another crucial element why they believe the contention is that social media is seen as a great contributory factor in providing more of them. the Finally, the most compelling evidence of this that cannot be overlooked is that people are living a foreign country can communicate with their family in real time.
From the other standpoint, others are not the content with the aforementioned benefits; they insist that relying too much on social media is not only negative but also disadvantageous. Primarily, anyone can see that depending on social media for communication is associated with breaking their real relationship. Such being the case, it is no exaggeration to say that nowadays most people watch their social media despite meeting their friends. (현실에서 만났을 때에도 그렇게 한다라는 말씀이신가요? 그러면 이를 조금 더 구체적으로 드러내주셔야 합니다. 영작 실력이 충분히 좋으신 만큼 제가 굳이 바꿔드리지 않아도 스스로 잘 바꾸시리라 믿지만, 혹시 모르시겠다면 댓글 주시면 도와드릴게요.) What is also worth noticing is that social media for communication is considered to waste of their life. From the point of view, it follows that some people would be addicted to social media so they could not focus on their own business such as working.
Without going in circles, I am inclined to be of the same opinion that the development of social media is definitely important for communication, however, I cannot say social media outweighs face to face communication because face to face communication is also quite important for communicating in their life. |