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It is true that the
rate of crimes committed by criminals after release from jail never decreases because the
job market is harsh for them. While this is a serious problem, it can be solved
by implementing a law which provides an opportunity for criminals to find a job
after finishing their duty.
The main
cause of recidivism is that people having criminal records have a difficulty in
finding a job. Many owners have a prejudice over criminals, and it makes them
hesitate to hire criminals. According to a recent survey, 80% of employers answered
that a clean criminal record is the first criteria they consider when hiring
employees because it shows how well a person follows a rule. On the contrary, 70%
of criminals answered that they committed the same crime again merely to make
ends meet since they do not have any marketable skill. (능력 부족이라기보다는 기회 부족으로 서술해야 문단의 핵심과 일치할 수 있습니다.)
Nevertheless,
there are solutions to this problem. One of the ways to solve this issue is to establish
a quota to hire former convicts. There are some occupations which people
neglect to choose voluntarily, such as farming, cleaning high-rise skyscrapers,
and delivering products. The drudgery is necessary to a society,
and criminals can fill the role. In fact, a criminal protection act has
implemented in the United States since 2000. Going through a trial and error,
this policy became prevalent in unattractive fields. In addition, the rate of
recidivism experienced experiences a gradual decline over the past two decades by earning a
steady income.
In conclusion, it is clear that many criminals
commit crimes after finishing an imprisonment period to earn a living (취업 기회가 없기 때문~으로 작성해주셔야 합니다.). Nonetheless,
this issue can be resolved by setting a policy to hire a certain portion of criminals
in non-popular jobs. |