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The table shows the main reasons why people in Britain go went to libraries during the period between 1990 and 2000. Meanwhile, the bar chart shows the proportion of people in the country who accessed the Internet on a regular basis during the decade. (인터넷을 꾸준히 사용한 사람의 비율이 아닌, 인터넷이 있었던 가구의 비율입니다. 표를 정확히 확인해주셔야 해요.)
According to the table, people in the UK go went to libraries mainly for their research (offline)at 34% in 1990, and but this figure almost halved in 2000. The second biggest reason was borrowing and returning books at 32%, while it is the highest percentage in 2000. (더 정확한 표현이 필요합니다. 쉼표 이전은 연도 표현이, 쉼표 이후는 수치 표현이 들어가야 해요.) On the other hand, there is an interesting change between 1990 and 2000. Over the entire research period, the percentage of using and connecting to the internet skyrocketed from 3% to 22%. This trend was supported by the increased frequency of Internet usage (여기의 경우도 서론과 비슷한 맥락에서, 가구의 비율임을 명시해주셔야 합니다. 보급율 등으로 작성하는 것도 괜찮고요.) in Britain, as seen in the bar chart data.
As a general observation, the main reasons for library visits in Britain changed between 1990 and 2000, just when Internet usage in the country became more regular. In fact, in 2000, more individuals mainly went to libraries for Internet use rather than for offline research. (지금과 같은 overview 는 아주 좋습니다. 아주 좋은데, 서론 밑으로 넣어주셔야 해요. 먼저 자료에 대한 포괄적인 분석을 한 뒤, 세부사항을 다루는 형식으로 작성되어야 합니다. 이는 모든 Task 1 유형에 해당됩니다.)
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