Your Answer ▼ There are some people who believe that history subject is very important in schools. However, some people others assert that science and technology subjects are more important. This is a contentious issue because both these subjects are essential for students. For this topic, I think science and technology subjects are more important than history subject. (여기의 경우 former latter 를 이용해서 대체해주시면 좋습니다.)
To begin with, some people believe that history subject is very important for students. This is because students can learn the ancestors' wisdom from history classes. For example, during the King Sejong's period in the Chosun dynasty in Korea, people can learn King Sejong's wisdom and skills, since there are so enormous works during this period (이렇게 작성하는 것은 그저 위에서 했던 말을 세종대왕만 붙여서 반복하는 것에 지나지 않습니다. 세종대왕의 어떤 지식과 기술을 배울 수 있는지에 대한 언급이 되어야 근거 전개가 가능합니다.). Also, people can learn lessons and values from their mistakes. (<- 이에 대한 보충 설명을 해주세요~) Therefore, learning history subject is important for students.
On the other hand, other people assert that science and technology are more important than history. This is because, in modern society, science and technology are essential skills for students even though for workers. Most of the people use computers, smart phones and other electronic devices while working and studying, so students have to learn these subjects as early as possible. According to the survey, most job seekers and
university students have license which is related to computers or other
electronic programs. Also, most workers believe that science and technology
skills are very crucial and essential for their work. More importantly, the artificial intelligence will overwhelm our work and life in the future, so if we want to conduct artificial intelligence, students need to study science and tecnology essentially. For these reasons, I think that learning these subjects are crucial for students. (discuss both opinions 유형에서는 내 의견은 결론에 몰아주시면 되고, 본론은 중립적으로 구성해야 합니다.)
To sum up, both subjects are important for students as their school subjects. However, since we live in a the fast-developing society, I think that studying science and technology are is more necessary for our practical life.
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