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The line graph indicates the employment figure in South Korea from 1981 to 2011 divided into three different sectors. Overall, it is apparent that there were significant shift in services and agriculture's workers rates. On the other hand, the figure of workers in industry has not nearly changed much during the three decades.
As can be seen in the graph, the rate of services' workers was the highest in 1981, representing nearly 40%. In the year 2011, this figure went significantly up was significant go up by 30% (퍼센트포인트로 표시해주셔야 합니다. 이에 대해서는 총평에서 링크를 하나 넣어드리겠습니다.), which was the dominant rate entirely compared to other sectors. On the other hand, in the first year, the percentage of employment in agriculture showed the second highest rate. However, this figure showed a was seen downward trend over the period, eventually reducing to 5% (수치가 정확하게 떨어지지 않을 경우, 임의로 수치를 확정지어서 작성해서는 안 되고, 그냥 대략 5% 등으로 작성해주세요.), which was the lowest rate among the three sectors. In industry, meanwhile, there was a slight increase in its rate, peaking peaked of 35% in 1991. However, this figure decreased continuously by 10% (여기도 마찬가지로 퍼센트포인트가 필요하고요.) later two decades.
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