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People in nowadays seem to concern about their health more than in the past. It makes them to examine where they should live, city or countryside, as it is fact that surroundings affect to people`s health.
In the countryside or outskirt, we can get both mental and physical benefits for several reasons. First of all, there are less pollution than in the middle of the big city. Especially, there are few industries and vehicles than in the big city. It makes our body can hold it`s health. Besides, there are less noise and lights at the night in the countryside. We can hear the birds in the morning and owls in the night. That is the most important advantages from lining in the countryside, namely nature. Usually living in the countryside means living near the forest ot the mountains. Owing to this, we can feel nature easily. Nature has calming power, and heals our mental and physical wounds.
However, in the big city, there are numerous factories and cars that emit air pollutant such as sulfur oxides and nitro oxides, which finally turning into the fine particles. Besides, there are too many people in the city nowadays, that makes us cannot easily be relaxed. It is fact that in the big city, we can be in hurry even if there is a park in the city. Furthermore, there are many harmful chemical substances in the new buildings.
In conclusion, I do agree with the statement that living in big cities like cosmopolitan such as Seoul and New York is not good for our mental and physical health.
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