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Due to the advance of communication technology, the way that people communicate with each other changed significantly. In this eassy, I will review how technology has changed the types of relationships and argue that why it is a negative develepment.
Technology has changed the way of communication completely in the direction that is easier and quicker, therefore the relationship between people has chnaged similarly. With new communication gadgets such as mobile phones and the Intenet, people can send and receive their messeges in a second even when they are far way from each other. They do not need to wait to send or receive, and they just push the send button to say whatever they want to say instantly, also actually a sender does not need to face the receiver, so he or she could be more frank but at the same time can be rude as well. (여기의 경우 새로운 문장으로 넣는 게 낫습니다. 문장이 너무 길어지지 않도록 주의해주세요!) Compared to the past, the communicaiton became easier and lighter, so did relationships.
I believe this change is negative, because the quality of communication become poorer. Thanks to the convenient tools, the communication became too easy, too cheap, and to frequent, therefore people take the contents less seriously compared to the past. For example, when there were no mobile phones, people had to write a letter on papers for a whole day, and they wrote very long and specific messages. However, nowadays, such an effort is are not needed and the messages between people became very instant and superficial. In conclusion, due to the advance of commuicaition technology, the reations between people chnages easier and faster, and because people do not care of the contentents very nuch nowadays, the quality of communication became poorer comapred to the past.
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