With the development of technology, consumer behaviour has changed considerably these days. It changed the way how to purchase products, and, people are taking advantages of these changes. In this essay, I would suggest consumer activities that were affected by technology, and the advantages.
Noticeable
Changes changes that technology created are online shopping and delivery services. With
the development of the Internet, people do not have to go to shops to buy
something that they need. Consumers easily can browse online shops without big
efforts. Also, a delivery service might be the most convenient factor for busy
modern people. For instance, many people order some ingredients in the bedroom
by through a mobile phone to prepare lunch for the next day. This suggests nowadays,
consumers are able to buy and get very quickly fastly due to online shopping and
delivery services.
I personally believe the The
advantages of those changes outweigh the disadvantages. Technology gave modern
people exactly the necessary advantages. Through online shopping and delivery
services, people can save lots of time, and, they are more likely to meet various
kinds of products. The only disadvantage, I think, is the possibility of
getting the wrong products. We often get different products from we ordered.
However, companies are good at treating these mistakes, for example, they give a full (full refund 라는 표현은 시험을 떠나서 나중에 외국 가셔서도 잘 쓰일 표현이니까 참고해주세요!) refund or compensate for the misdelivered product.
To
sum up, it is evident that technology affected customers positively, such as
online shopping, delivery services. These changes have lots of advantages in
terms of convenience. In spite of having disadvantages, the advantages outweigh
the drawbacks because of saving it saves people's time and effort for shopping.
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