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Classroom settings often focus on all different various subjects, and this is considered as compulsory education for every teenagers. In this regard, it is often argued that the students should learn them all before becoming adults. However, some people think that they need to concentrate more on their favorites (여기는 best 관련해서도 적어주셔야 합니다.). I also agree with them and will discuss the reasons in this essay.
Actually, inexperienced youngsters have time to develop themselves, and schools can help them by providing options such as specialised subjects. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect, and with this investment of time, they can be anything when they graduate. (여기의 경우 학교의 역할, 그리고 연습의 중요성을 강조하는 내용이지, 'subject they are best at or they are interested in을 강조한다고 보기에는 어렵습니다. 또한, they can be anything when they graduate라는 문장은 오히려 all subjects쪽에 적합하고요.) For example, if they like music more than other subjects, they can start to play the piano at an earlier stage of life and become a real pianist.
Also, it can be more important for students to learn all the senses that they have than only school subjects. Most adults struggle when they develop artistic hobbies because of the lack of them, and this is because there were not many opportunities. The senses can actually react to what they like, and it is easier to find what it is when they are at school with full of opportunities.
In conclusion, teenage students should concentrate more on interesting subjects (best 관련해서도 넣어주세요!) than all courses in schools. This is because they can dream early and can feel what it is like. |