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It is true that as the number of using the
Internet users has increased, more people prefer online shopping malls to
concrete shops. Some people believe that someday, these physical shops will no
longer be available. Personally, I disagree with the statement and the reason why I think
like that will be is presented in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, those customers who need the
goods immediately would use the concrete shops because using online shops takes a longer time to receive the items they buy. Obviously, the fastest way to get
the items would be using physical stores. When we do shopping on Amazon.com, we
should consider the delivery period which could take from few days to even some
months. In this regard, urgent people would be hesitant to use online shops online shops could make urgent people hesitate to use.
Moreover, shopping in concrete shops
attracts consumers, to enabling them to check the status of merchandises that is
impossible when using online malls. This is because not only could information
that is described the online shopping malls be incorrect, but also there are some preferable
items to buy in stores by consumers’ themselves. Shopping in physical stores could
reduce the possibilities of that being disappointed by goods due to the discrepancy
as well as it can give fulfillment by letting people leave the store with the
goods right away. In this respect, it is apparent that the physical stores have
their own advantages that people cannot give away.
In conclusion, for these reasons I
mentioned above, I disagree the statement (이렇게 쓰는 대신, 이게 뭔지를 다시 한번 상기시켜주시면 좋습니다. 즉, 핵심에 대한 꾸준한 상기를 하는 것이죠.). This is because the concrete shops
have their steady demand would lead them to survive that lead them to being survived.
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