Your Answer ▼ Many people have different ideas on the subjects in school curriculum. Regarding this, it is mentioned that the most important subject is History whereas some argue that learning Science and Technology is more important than History. Personally, I agree with the former view However I agree with the view that History is more crucial than others.
On the one hand, the importance to know History, especially own country's History (이거 전반에 대해서는 밑에서 말씀드리겠습니다. 참고로 과학 기술에도 똑같이 적용되는 사항입니다.) cannot be undeniable. By knowing the History, people can learn from the errors in the past to prepare the future. Not only that, they can be proud of the developments in culture, politics, and economy throughout the time. In Korea, for instance, the History subject which was once an optional choice in high school became an essential subject which should be taught to every students without an exception around 10 years ago as many educational professionals got to recognize the importance of learning History and also the danger without it. I strongly believe the History is more than a subject which should be reminded and learned throughout the life. Thus, it is desirable to study History as an formal subject from the school as a good first step.
On the other hand, the sector of Science and Technology is crucial around the world in this contemporary society. It has changed our life dramatically, allowing us to enjoy more convenient lives with a number of inventions and developments. Furthermore, we clearly know that it is not the end and the advancement will be far faster and more extensive in the future. Thus it is substantial that school for schools to provide the chance of education of those subjects as basic essential basic knowledge for students who find interests on them and take a further path in a higher-level education like college Universities. It is obviously a good investment to raise those students for our future.
In conclusion, while the subjects like Science and Technology is indispensible, I strongly believe the importance of learning History from school cannot be compared.
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크~게 문제는 없었는데, 한 가지만 짚고 넘어가면 좋을 것 같습니다. history 관련해서, 원칙적으로는 소문자 시작하는 게 맞습니다. 그러나 예외적으로 학교 과목으로써의 역사를 의미할 때에는 대문자 시작이 가능은 합니다. 대신 일반 학문으로써의 역사, 대표적으로 제가 표시해드린 경우에는 무조건 소문자 시작입니다.
그런데 이걸 일일히 구분하는 게 쉽지 않고, 구분하더라도 글이 되게 지저분해져요. 고로 그냥 싹 소문자로 몰아서 시작하는 걸 추천드립니다.
수고하셨습니다 :)
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