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This table graph shows the advertising costs and revenues of five types of products sold by a European company in 2004. Overall, it is clear revenues are not proportionate to advertising costs. that it is not relevant with advertising and revenues. The biggest investment in advertisement costs was made in televisions. In contrast, the lowest advertisement costs were washing machine. However, the best revenues were computers made the most revenues. Looking at the table graph more closely, one can see that it is opposite results related to advertisement costs and revenues. The the highest advertisement cost products with the highest advertisement costs were televisions as 40.06 percent and the air conditioners as 36.6 percent. However, televisions percentage of revenues was 16.4 and the air conditioners were 23.7 percent. Meanwhile Nevertheless, the computers, refrigerators and the washing machine were advertisements costs lower than other products. However, they gave were given higher profits for a European company. Furthermore, especially the computers showed were the highest profits at 42.95 percent. But (문장을 and but so로 시작하는 것은 좋지 않습니다.), the computer advertisement costs were only 12.96 percent.
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