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# Art is one of the elements that makes constitute our lives more vibrant. Therefore, some of people strongly claim that the government should raise the budget for art, when compared to education higher the budget for art than education. However, it can be quite a dangerous opinion. The reason why we have to allocate a higher budget for education is because education is most important to children, and people have to expand more chances to be educated. # Why education is most important thing for children? (지금은 연설문의 대본을 쓰는 과정이 아니기 때문에, 의문형은 따로 쓰실 일이 없다고 보셔도 무방합니다.) It is because for young children, education is root of their future and one of the greatest chance to find their dreams. In fact, many people choose choosen their dream or future based on what they learned in their childhood. Also, the most accesible way to see world is education. While they learn learning about various things of world through education, they can find their dream more easily . # Furthermore, one of the world's big problems is that some of the elderly did not have a chanceto learn anything he some of elder people never got chance to get learned something. Seriously, some of them even not know how to write word or read something. Therefore, we have a duty to make more chances that least make possible them to learn basic things that necessary to live. (여기는 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.) But if the government reduce the budget for education, it will hard to make possible them to give learning opportunity.
#As I mentioned above, art make our lives more colorful and vibrant. However, art is not everything of the world and it might be hard to give people to various dreams. In contrast Oppositely, education can give various chance and dreams to people. |