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<Topic> You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In the last 20 years there have been significant
developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the
World Wide Web and communication by email. However, these developments in IT
are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree? |
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It is commonly
believed that the proliferation of advanced technologies has enhanced the quality
of people’s live enormously for the last two decades, especially, communication-wise.
Even though some people say that the IT may give negative impacts such as overloaded
duties outside the workplace, I would like to opine that the Internet (인터넷은 웬만하면 대문자 시작한다고 보시면 됩니다. 단, 그렇게 크게 중요한 사항은 아니에요.) Although
sometimes burgeoning industries have downsides, I strongly believe that the growth
of IT brings What is more, the World Wide Web enables It is no doubt
that the normalized real-time communication changed lots of things, and another According
to the above analysis, I am truly convinced the developed technologies’ disadvantages
cannot overshadow the innumerable benefits. By improving it more than now, we
may pursue |
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항상 감사드립니다 :)
총평: 잘 써주셨습니다. 글에 대해 따로 말씀드릴 건 없을 것 같고, 대신 지금처럼 본론을 세 개나 적을 경우 시간 부족의 위험이 생길 수 있는데, 이는 꽁치님께서 잘 조절해주시리라 믿습니다.
수고하셨습니다 :)