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The two graphs charts illustrates the trend of the number of immigrators in the United Kingdom for 40 years from 1962>> to when?? and the nationality of the immigrants in 1996 and 2002.
Overall, the number of immigrants increased from 20,000 to 120,000 during the period. The rate of growth rate before the year of 1982 was lower than that of after 1982. >> Then,>>길어져서 끊어드립니다 and there was even a light decrease from 1972 to 1982. However, the number started to grow rapidly after 1982,>> 콤마 빼주세요 주어가 같을 때 콤마를 씁니다 and the increasing tendency got became >> get 동사 자제해주세요 stronger after 1992.
The origin of immigrants' nationality was divided by four groups: Asia, Africa, Europe, and others including America and Australia. The majority of immigrants were Asian with 49,000 and 58,000 in 1996 and 2002,>> 콤마 빼주세요 respectively. The second and the third ones were Europe and Africa of 9,000, but the number soared to 27,000 and and 25,000. Other group The group, others, was the only group that was decreased from 5,000 to 4,000 during the period.
In summary, the number of immigrants in the UK was increasing faster, and, from 1996 to 2002, the growth was largely due to the people from Europe and Africa.
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