Your Answer ▼Crimes bring about serious problems to live to people so
governments are trying to get through on increasing crimes. I will write what
the causes of the increase in crimes problems are and how to bring down them down.
Firstly, insufficient punishment is the one of the
reasons of the increasing crime rate. This is because, even thought people know they will get a punishment
when commit a crime. Since not strong fines and sentences, people are might
likely to look down on them. Although people know they will get punished when they commit a crime, they are likely to look down on them because the fines and sentences are not strong enough. In Korea, the legal policy is generous about murder rather
than compared to that of the other countries. If it is not a serous national issue, but a murder,
it is hard to get life imprisonment or death. Therefore, governments should
bring in strong policy that decrease crimes.
Secondly, inadequate healing facilities is reason on
increasing crimes. Most criminals have to live in a prison as much as they
committed a crime. However, it is unsatisfactory to help to be adjusted like common
people after released from prison. For this reason, the recidivism rate of
criminals is steadily increasing. Thus, criminals need various facilities such
as an employment agency or a mental institution.
In conclusion, governments are not only worry governments are not only worried about
increasing crimes but they also want to bring it down it. I think that the solutions are (여기에 동사 하나를 넣어주셔야 합니다. 도입하다 등이 있겠죠.) strong punishments and sufficient healing facilities for criminals. |