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The graph compares type of energy resources spent in the USA between 1980 and 2030. As an overall trend, it is clear that the most consumed energy is petrol and oil and the next group is coal and natural gas.
The number of petrol and oil consumption fluctuated considerably at 35 quadrillion units from 1980 to 2005. The consumption then will increase gradually to 42 quadrillion units in 2020 before rising more dramatically to 48 quadrillion units in 2030.
In 1980, the consumption of coal at 15 quadrillion units was lower than that of natural gas. However, after a volatile period over two decades, the amount of coal used will skyrocket from 23 quadrillion units in 2010 to 30 quadrillion units in 2030. On the other hand, since 2010, natural gas will have been consumed constantly at 23 quadrillion units per year.
The others such as nuclear, solar/wind, and hydropower started similarly at 4 quadrillion units in 1980. After modest variation, they will record 7, 6, and 3 quadrillion units in order of nuclear, solar/wind, and hydropower.>>이 부분을 어떻게 조화롭게할 수있을까요
In conclusion, It is clear that American will burn increasingly fuel out, and among the most weighty is always petroleum and oil.
---------ielts9 마지막 task1 이네요. (6.0을 위해서 ㅠㅠ)
이번에는 실제로 종이에다가 시간재면서 풀어봤는데 약 50분 걸렸어요....ㅠ(하다보면늘겠죠)
이번 문제와 같이 미래를 예측하는 그래프와 과거를 돌아보는 그래프가 같이 공존해있을 때 마지막 줄에 쓴(among the most weighty is always petroleum and oil.) 문장은 시제를 어떻게 써야할지 모르겠더라고요.
단어또한 consumption과 각자 그래프에 나온 이름을 자주 썻구요. 어떻게 바꿀수 있을 까요?
milion dollars 나 quadilion units 처럼 계속 반복되는 단위의 경우에는 반복해서 사용해도 상관 없는 건가요?
항상 감사드립니다. |