Your Answer ▼The two pie charts show the online shopping sales for electronics, food, home furnishings and video games (네 개의 다른 항목의~라고 적어주시면 됩니다. 안 그래도 글이 긴 편이며, Task 2에 쓸 시간도 부족한데 여기서 굳이 나열할 필요는 없어요. 만약에 네 항목을 포괄적으로 묶을 수 있는 제목이 있으면 그걸 활용해주셔도 좋지만, 여튼 나열하는데에 쓰는 시간은 아껴서 다른데에 투자해주세요.) in Canada in 2005 and 2010. First of all, according to the pie chart in 2005, the percentage of electronics and appliances was highest (largest) among four different sectors, and this figure followed by the percentage of home furnishings. The figures were 35% and 25%, respectively. In addition, the figure of food and beverage and the figure of video games were similar. The figures were 22% and 18%, respectively. Therefore, it is clear that both the percentage of appliance and the percentage of video games were more than half among four sections. In the second chart, there is a slight change in all of sectors. At the first, the percentage of electronics and appliance showed a slight decrease while the percentage of video games had an increase. The figures were 30% and 23%, respectively. It is also noteworthy that the figure of home furnishing fell from 25% to 15% during the period. Finally, the pie chart showed that the percentage of food and beverage had a significant increase during the same period. The figure rose from 22% to 32%. To sum up, four sectors all had changes, and the most notice sector were the figure of food and home furnishings. (이전에도 말씀드렸듯이 Task 1은 결론을 내기 위한 글이 아닙니다. 주어진 자료에 대한 분석을 하기 위한 성격에 글이므로, 지금과 같은 요약은 세부적인 분석을 하기 앞서 먼저 언급해주셔야 해요. 즉, 이 문단은 서론 뒤로 가야 하고, to sum up 이라는 표현은 적절하지 않습니다.) |