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| The common trend in modern society is that
many people travel by airplane. Some people assert that only rich people can
take the advantage of air travel. However, I firmly believe that everyone
benefits from this. The reasons are that there are many cheaper tickets than
before and parents who want to go abroad for their children. I will further outline
my argument below.
First of all, these days, there are a lot
of air travel companies and inevitably, fierce competitions happen. Thus, some
of them often offer special price tickets, so they are affordable for everyone.
For example, one month ago, Asiana Airlines provided a special event for their
customers, so people gained tickets at half of the original halved price. The people who obtained these were
not only the rich people, but also the ordinary people.
On the other hand Furthermore, nowadays, the travels with an which have educational purpose increased. This is because parents have a tendency wanted to
tour other countries for their children using their vacations. They are mundane
people, not the rich. If people have clear goal to go to other countries, they
tend to buy air travel ticket regardless of how much money they have. One survey conducted by Seoul National
University has shown that substantial number of students went to all around the
world with their parents to their education. (여기에 대해서는 총평에서 말씀드리겠습니다.)
To sum up, many people including the ordinary
enjoy the air travel, because of special price of tickets and their educational
purpose. In this regard, I strongly believe that the people who take the advantage
of air travel aren’t are not (줄임말을 사용하는 것은 지양해주세요.) only the rich. |
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