It is a common belief that doing
assignments plays a significant part in the learning process. Therefore, some
people believe that it should be mandatory to do homework. Nonetheless, I
strongly support that it is hard to say that doing homework is beneficial
because students can lean more while participating in extracurricular
activities.
On the one hand, doing homework allows
students to understand the materials well. Learners need to establish the
principles first when learning something new new thing; then, they can apply the theories
when solving problems. According to recent research in South Korea, high school
students who barely miss the assignments during the educational process not
only graduated with good grades but also advanced to prestigious colleges.
Consequently, a number of educational experts assert that assignments (숙제가 성적에 도움이 되었다라는 사실 자체는 아무 의미가 없습니다. '왜' 혹은 '어떻게' 숙제가 복습/성적/입시에 도움이 되는지를 적어주세요~예를 들면 숙제를 하는 과정에서 이전에 배웠던 것들에 대해 다시 한번 고민해보게 되고, 이로 인해 머릿속에 박아놓는데 도움이 된다. 등의 내용을 넣으면 됩니다.) help
learners to review lessons, enhances long-term memories and comprehension.
On the other hand, there are a wide variety
of options which students can choose to explore the world rather than solely
covering class materials. These days, students spend much time on exercising,
travelling, or playing a musical instrument. In fact, universities with high
reputation in the United States prefer to accept applicants who took part in
various types of activities such as volunteer works in underprivileged
countries. Those who have the not ordinary experiences are more likely to
possess broader understands over world compared to the students have does not.
Therefore, the time spent on extracurricular activities is worthwhile. (여기는 총평에서 말씀드릴게요.)
In conclusion, it is evident that it (문단에 처음 등장하는 대상을 대명사로 적어서는 안 됩니다.) helps
to finish projects to keep up with class materials. Nevertheless, I firmly
believe that in-depth understanding over the world could be achieved by having
a number of experiences rather than solving math questions. Thus, it is
crucial to invest a significant amount of time visiting new places or physical
activities besides going over only projects. |