The table illustrates how many people visit Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. And, the charts show the result of the survey of visitor satisfaction during the same two periods.
Overall, what stands out from the table is that visitors who went to the museum the year after refurbishment are more than the number of visitors during the year before refurbishment. Also, it is noticeable that there were big changes in the share of dissatisfied and very satisfied visitors.
Focusing on the number of visitors, 18,000 more people visited the museum during the year after refurbishment compared to the year before refurbishment. The number of visitors increased from 74,000 to 92,000.
Looking at the big changes in the charts, the proportion of dissatisfied and very satisfied changed remarkably. The share of people who replied dissatisfied with their visit decreased from 40% to 15%. Also, another big change was seen in the share of satisfied people. After refurbishment, 20 percent points more people replied that they satisfied with their visit.
선생님!
1. percent points 배운대로 써봤는데 맞나요?
2. 부분? 구분된 그 부분? 을 말할 때
"차트의 dissatisfied 부분은 40%를 차지하고 있다." 를
The sector of dissatisfied in the chart constitutes 40% of the total. 이렇게 적으면 이상한가요?
3. 항상 도움 많이 주셔서 감사합니다 ^ㅇ^!!!!