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The presented bar graph illustrates how many Australian males and females did regular physical activity in the percentage scale in the year 2010. It is clear that close to half of Australian men and women adults did some kind of routine physical activity for the survey period. (<---이 문장에서 '꾸준히' 라는 의미를 드러내주세요!) In general, middle aged females were the most physically active, while males aged 35 to 44 did the least physical activity. When it comes to the youngest age category (15 to 24) (jwldud94님 정도 실력이면 충분히 괄호 없이 문장을 구성하실 수 있고, 그렇게 하는 게 GRA에서 유리합니다.), almost 53 per cent men but only 47.7 per cent of women did regular physical activity. However, between the ages of 25 and 44, the rate of men significantly dropped at nearly 50 per cent, compared with a slight increase in slightly increased the figure of women at 48.9 per cent. Moreover, in the 35 to 44 age group, there are is the biggest proportions difference between men and women at nearly 40 per cent and 53 per cent respectively. (그 차이가 대략 13 퍼센트포인트임을 명시해주시는 것도 좋습니다.) In terms of Australian adults aged from 45 to 64, the figure for physical activity of the men slightly rose to about 45 per cent, whereas that of the women remained around 8 per cent (퍼센트포인트로 적어주셔야 합니다.) higher, at 53 per cent. Finally, in the age group for 65 and over, the males who regularly exercised were as almost same with the females at approximately 47 per cent. |