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The tables illustrate sales of
Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European nations.
Overall, it seems clear that Switzerland
took the highest amount of coffee sales in 1999, while the UK accounted for the
summit of coffee sales in 2004 among five countries. On the other hand, it is
apparent that Switzerland kept the largest amount of bananas sales among the
nations in 1999 and 2004 at 15 million and 47 million respectively. (현재의 내용은 밑에서 세부적인 분석을 할 때 더 어울리고, 표의 내용을 보다 깔끔하게 묶을 수 있는 사항으로는 '스웨덴과 덴마크의 바나나 sale 을 제외한 나머지는 모두 ~~가 증가했다.' 가 됩니다. overview 가 지금과 같이 길 필요는 없어요.)
Looking at the first table closely, the
amount of coffee sales in the UK went up exponentially between 1999 and 2004,
which resulted in 20 million euros in 2004. (시작점도 적어주셔야 이게 진짜 exponentially 인지 알 수 있겠죠.) The sales amount of Switzerland
also doubled from 3 million to 6 million euros in 2004. Meanwhile, in other
three nations of Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden, the quantities of coffee sales grow
up insignificantly compared to the UK and Switzerland.
When it comes to the second table, the number
of bananas sales in 2004 in Switzerland was almost triple that of 1999.
Furthermore, rapidly shot up the amounts of bananas sales in the UK and Belgium
between 1999 and 2004. However, Sweden and Denmark needed to experience (여기의 경우 어떤 의미로 needed to experience 라고 적어주신지는 알겠고, 문법상 오류도 없지만, 개인적으로는 그냥 experienced 로 쓰는 게 나아보이네요. 물론 여기의 경우는 진짜 제 개인의 의견이라 그냥 참고만 해주세요~)moderately
decreased rates of bananas sales between those years. |