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Some people think that it is beneficial that they to accept negative situations in their lives, however, others argue that they should fight against those situations and improve them. I believe it is significantly positive for people to try to improve their bad situations. On the one hand, sometimes, taking current bad situations could be beneficial for people in the long run. Generally, it needs requires time for people to understand their miserable situation thoroughly, and unless they do not understand them fully, they tend to make poor choices at the end. In addition, if people accept their bad situations and spend more time, they can find good factors of them, including their reasons and meanings of them. These are absolutely useful information for them to change their bad situation in a positive way in the future. In real lives, most of people have similar experiences that they regret in regretting about decisions which they did not throughly know about the situation fully, and made worse choices.
However, on the other hand, there are those who believe that people should keep trying to change a bad situation and make best efforts to find out better alternatives. Once giving up, situations would never change, but if people keep trying to find alternatives, the possibility to change bad situations will go up, because most of time, under the bad conditions or circumstance there could be hidden solutions even though when the situation looks impossible to change. Most of the advances in science or technology are good examples, since they were are made especially when most people believed it was is too difficult to change the current situation. (구체적인 과학 기술 중 하나를 제시해주시는 게 좋았을 겁니다.)
In conclusion, sometimes people need to have time to take current bad situations and try to understand it deeply, however, I believe it is a better idea that people should keep trying to find solutions to them, and to change them into more positive situations. 저 지워진 부분은 필요없으니까, 내 의견이 '왜' 그런지에 대해 설명해주세요.)
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