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Some people think that advertisements (참고로, commercial 이라는 동의어가 존재합니다.) have social drawbacks, however,
others believe that advertisements have influenced economic situations
positively. Despite the rational reasons for both perspectives, I think that
the latter is more crucial.
There are those who insist that advertisements have triggered off
various social problems. It is true that many people want to get their desired
items that people have seen in commercials advertising, so this would be caused by cause the
dissatisfaction of their life. Children are eager to buy new advertised toys
while pestering their parents who have been difficulties to earn family living
expenses. The youngers who do not have a proper idea of personal economic situation
tend to buy their dream car which is revealed through advertisement rather than
saving incomes. Whit these experiences, people would suffer from psychological
problems like depression, frustration or anxiety, dealing with a severe imbalance
of domestic economy.
However, others assert that advertisements could be the milestone of
improving the country’s economy. It cannot be denied that companies have
boosted their sales through various kinds of products’ advertisements. (With
these tremendous profits, they have to pay more taxes which are is indispensable
for the government’s administration. More importantly, companies would require need more
employees to manage their business, thereby continuing to hire many candidates
to soar their profits.) Alongside the stable working place, the public can enjoy
abundant life. That is the reason why companies have tried to advertise their
products all over the world, and the masses and authorities have supported
local products’ advertising.
In conclusion, I think that despite some social problems from
advertisements, the public, companies and the government could have more
economical benefits such as stable life, higher profits and enough taxes to
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