Your Answer ▼ As time goes by, new environmental problems show up due to lots of reasons. There are some species of plants and animals that are no longer exist, and air pollution is also a serious problem was not people's worry in the past. Furthermore, people laughed was laugh when someone said that we should buy waters would have to buy water in the future.
Some people believe that extinction of plants and animals is much more important than other problems. As environmental problems are getting worse, lots of animals and plants plats became rare oreven disappeared. They worry that humans also can be disappeared as dinosaurs did a long time ago. As all creatures are connected with each other in ecosystem, if anything goes extinct, it would affect to all other connected species. (여기부터가 핵심입니다. '어떠한' 영향을 주는지에 대해 작성할 수 있어야 해요.)
Meanwhile, other people insist that other problems, like air and water pollutions, are those we must focus on. The ecosystem Ecosystem is consisted of lots of components, and especially air and water are essential to all the species living on the earth. They believe that there cannot can't be anything at all without air and water. The more developments humans make without considering its side effects, the worse this problem becomes (참고로 여기도 마찬가지입니다. 어떠한 문제가 있는지 작성할 수 있어야 합니다.) More and more development human makes without considering its side effect, they are getting worse and worse rapidly.
I believe that people should consider that air and water pollutions are much more important than others and have become much worse than before. It is invisible but we can feel that they are suffering. If we do not save our nature, it is not that far future that we should carry water can and oxygen mask. (논제에서 요구된 바가 없는 '제언' 을 하지 마시고, 그냥 왜 공기와 수질 오염이 가장 중요한 문제인지에 대한 근거를 작성해주세요~) |