■ You should spend about 40 minutes on this task
■ Present a written argument or case to an educated reader no special knowledge of?the?following topic
■ You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant ???evidence
■ You should write at least 250 words | |
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Topic : Many people now have personal computers, and the use of electronic service such as the internet is becoming more widespread. Some parents are concerned about children using the internet to gamble or buy goods on credit.
How can access to electronic services be controlled? | |
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Developing of computers has been changing people's life so much. Numerous of electronic services are available on internet, like electronic commercial business. These services make populace's life conveniently, but it is true that using of electronic services need some effective controls.
People deal with a lot of businesses through the internet easily, and it aids to save time and money. Just several clicking makes dealings, what people need for this is only some identity information and credit cards. In this point of view, definitely it is quite convenient, but there are some serious problems as a result of that. Nowadays, the identity theft through the electronic services is an enormous problem, and this correlate with money significantly, because of the leak of information on credit cards. Moreover, as it mentioned in topic, it is really attractive to children, who do not have sufficient attention to realize right and wrong, gambling or purchasing stuffs on credit. This circumstance shows the leak of the adult confirmation system too.
People should be careful to use pass words, and parents should not give any chances to children to using their information. Parents should have attention more, and sometimes it is necessary to check connected web-sites by children. Furthermore, governments should enhance the security of adult confirmation systems with preparing strong regulation for electronic services.
In conclusion, I believe that in spite of the useful using of the electronic services, it is essential to have attention. Individuals should be careful the identity information by themselves to protect for not only oneself, but also children. In addition, governments should enhance regulations, and they should have responsibilities for internet services. | |
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