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It is a common belief that one of the most effective ways to alleviate contamidation is imposing a heavy tax to industrial companies who cause it. However, it there is a more persuasive argument that there will be a better ways to solve this matter.
One on hand, there are people arguing that a number of companies who provoke this problem should pay a heavy tax. To explain, after the Fourth Industrial Revolution four industrial revolusion, many industrial companies have operated some factories and this contaminted air is scattered into the air. As a result, the environment is damaged and people's health are also contimidated by this. Moreover, if the gorvernment introduces to charge the tax, it would bring some positive results to our society because many companies try to reduce using the natural resourese like fossil fule in order to avoid charging a haevy tax.
On the other hand, others claim that this is not only companies' problems but also all citizen's matters. To be specific, it is fact that companies cause a lot of poullution to the environment. However, nowadays, using an automobile has have adverse effects to nature because many car also emit a great deal of pollution. If if people cannot reduce using a car, they it might face the worst circumstance in the long run. Therefore, as long as people are conscious of the loss of environment, they should try to use other types of transportaion such as subway, bus and bicycle.
In conclusion, some people think that companies should charge the tax to reduce pollution because they have a blame this problem. However, I still believe that a usage of many cars also cause a lot of exhausted fumes, so people should might help to reduce a pollution level by using a public transport.
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