■ DirectionYou have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.■ QuestionSummarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM WRITING ANSWER BOOKLET Candidate Name:텍스트 | Candidate Number:텍스트 | Centre Number:텍스트1 | Date:텍스트1 |
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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation? |
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In modern times, people tend to prefer owning their own home rather than renting it. There are so many people who are concerned about the rising house price, saving their paycheck to make a certain house their property in someday. It is natural instinct for people to have some stuffs including house, clothes, cars so that we do not have to judge this instinct is positive or negative thing. This essay will explore why people want to buy their own house and what makes people satisfied when they succeed to get their home. When it comes to the social atmosphere, people get stressed easily in competitive enviroment. In school, teacher want students to get much more higher grade as long as they can, similarly in the workplace adults would be given the tasks that they should complete perfectly as soon as possible. If people have their own house where their family live together, it can make people relieve their stress as they have some place to communicate with precious people, taking some rest. Having a home can refresh people and help them get back to work after having good time in their home. Owning house can also reduce uncertanity. Nowadays, house prices have surged dramatically and bad economy stay longer than expectations. The more rent fee rises, the more difficult people who rent their house stay longer in this situation. Owning house can not only protect people from problems such as moving out regardless of their feeling but also get rid of possibility of rise of rental fee. Additionally possessing house is important thing among people in society, as some people decide middle class people depending on criteria on which they possess their own home or not. In conclusion, this phenomenon in which people want to possess their own home does not have to be decided whether this is positive or negative. In many countries, wish to owning their house is commonly thought as natural thinking and people take it for granted as social situation, that is why politicians are trying to stabilize real estate market for their national people.
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EXAMINER’S USE ONLY | Total Score: /9 | Examiner: | | TR (Task Response) | CC (Coherence and Cohesion) | LR (Lexical Resource) | GRA (Grammatical Range and Accuracy) | Score | /9 | /9 | /9 | /9 |
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